Analysis of students work

WHAT WENT WELL:
- Close up of instruments
- Extreme close up of guitar with a narrow depth of field
- Costume: 'Indie style'
- Lighting good in majority of clip

EVEN BETTER IF:
- Lip syncing not matched up all the time
- Camera control
- Random slow motion
- Poor composition: 2 people on bench behind during performance shot
- Unclear narrative



WHAT WENT WELL:
- Editing in pace with the music
- Photobooth effect
- Non diegetic to diegetic music
- Clear narrative
- Balanced number of cuts
- Flashbacks were clear
- Instruments were synced
- Well choreographed
- Costumes match genre

EVEN BETTER IF:
- Camera control
- Framing slightly off
- Lighting hasn't been thought about
- Lip syncing



WHAT WENT WELL:
- Narrative matched lyrics: Andrew Goodwins theory
- Cutting pace goes with music towards the end
- Good location for the band
- Costume matches genre
-Variety of shots
- Good lip syncing

EVEN BETTER IF:
- Wasn't all in black and white
- Don't understand narrative
- Don't like the clip where the girl sings



WHAT WENT WELL:
- Clothing fits genre
- Location fits genre
- Experimented with green screen

EVEN BETTER IF:
- Lip syncing improved
- Used the green screen to much
- No variety of shots
- Switches performers to many times
- Narrative not very clear



WHAT WENT WELL:
- Clear flashbacks/dreams
- Narrative matches lyrics: Andrew Goodwin

EVEN BETTER IF:
- Camera control
- Performance shots were missing
- Too many effects
- Framing and lighting not thought about
- Narrative is confusing